Finished Production

Feedback from the class:

Positives
- Running water v.effective at the start
- Music builds up well, mystery and intriguing
- You can clearly see where title came from - reflections used
- Having no dialogue worked well with the psychological thriller
- Camera work is good and steady where required
- Music is good
- Good variety of shots/ music matches action well e.g. looking in mirror
- Excellent titles. Effective without drawing focus away from narrative
- Jonny's costume, in particular wearing white at the end connotes purity/ innocence.
- Great camera angles
- Great juxtaposition of shots.

Negatives/Improvements
- Jonny's costume could connote his characters role more
- Confusing narrative - going to the fridge


Feedback from the teacher:

Positives
- Demonstrates excellence across all technical aspects
- Dual narrative structure is very effective with controlled choice of shots.
- Match on action is particularly effective with well exectued soundtrack that adds polish to the piece.

Negatives/Improvements
- Costume could have been better considered - not entirly convincing for this style of thriller
-Some shots could of been re-shot/held for longer

Predicted grade at current stage: A